Saturday, April 23, 2011

Jubilee on the Square

April is National Poetry Month.  I had hoped to write and post more poetry this month here on this blog, but time has a way of getting away from me, and now spiders have begun to build webs in the corners of my blog, and the month is nearly over. 


Some of the bloggers that I visit have been writing and posting a poem every day from a list of poetry prompts.  I didn't sign up to do that because I knew I wouldn't get it done.  I thought I might use the prompts, however, to occasionally give me a jumping off point for my poetry.  You can see the list of prompts on the March 30th entry of JL Dodge's blog here if you are interested.


The poem I am writing for today is using the first prompt in the list which goes like this: "Grab the closest book. Go to page 29. Write down 10 words that catch your eye. Use 7 of the words in a poem. For extra credit, have 4 of them appear at the end of a line."


The ten words that I chose from page 29 of a nearby book were: particular, concoctions, flood, unsavory, fireworks, camp, mopping-up, clairvoyance, bless, and grudge.  I used seven of the words, which I underlined, but I didn't get the extra credit.  (I thought I was doing well just getting the poem written without aiming for overachieving!)  Every summer a street fair called the Jubilee Festival comes to my town, and I chose that as the subject of my poem.





JUBILEE ON THE SQUARE

The carnies wash in on a Friday night
in a flood of pick-up trucks
and tractor trailer rigs.
Just another small Midwestern town 
on their long list of summer gigs.


Ready to set up rides for the street fair,
unsavory-looking men dribble out,
until there's a puddle of them
ebbing to and fro in the town square
smoking and spitting and ambling about.

They set up camp to hawk their gambling games
and their deep-fried, artery-clogging concoctions.
Haggard faces on tattooed men with no names,
gypsies who have thrown to the wind all precautions.

They aren't particular as to where they sleep.
One town is as good as the next.
Everywhere they go, they're judged by the company they keep.
Why they choose such a life leaves many perplexed.

At the end of the week is the fireworks show.
While the townspeople line up to gasp and exclaim,
the carnies start mopping-up, getting ready to go.
Nothing left behind to show they were here
and on to the next town,
they're all the same, all the same.



11 comments:

... Paige said...

What a great prompt! and a super & duper poem

Happy weekend

Sandy said...

well wow great poem w/those prompts

Tracy said...

Daisy,
WOW!!! what a great piece of writing and I love what you did with all the words...very cool...and I so see the midwestern towns :)

Bossy Betty said...

As a midwestern native who looked forward to such fairs and was fascinated with the carnies--I loved this poem!

Thanks, Daisy.

Daisy said...

Thanks all for the kind comments. I hope you have a wonderful Easter! :-)

Cassie said...

You are incredibly talented Miss Daisy! Have a Happy Easter!! xx

Daisy said...

Thank you, Cassie! Happy Easter to you too! :)

Ryan said...

What a fantastic poem Daisy, your words kinda sum up the way I feel about travelling carnivals (I don't think I'd miss them) Happy Easter.

Daisy said...

Thanks, Ryan. Happy Easter to you and yours! :)

Betsy from Tennessee said...

Very Very nice, Daisy.. You are just SO creative.

Happy Easter to you and yours.
Hugs,
Betsy

Daisy said...

Happy Easter, Betsy! Thank you. :)