Thursday, August 26, 2010

A Poodle in the Park

In my poetry picture poll a few posts back, some of you requested I write a poem using all of the pictures from the poll in a poem.  I decided to give it a try and this is what I came up with.


A Poodle in the Park

So much to do
for a poodle in the park.
Chasing runaway bunnies,


it's hard not to bark.

So much to sniff:
 flowers around a rock,


hickory nuts that look like toys,


by the fence-- a shoe, a sock.


And oh so much to see...
 pink porcupines up high,


down low some prickly green,


and buzzards floating by.


On the way back home now,
can you hear the cicada buzz?


The poodle is getting tired.
He's not as bouncy as he was.

The lily by the fence


and sunflowers in a row,


the poodle perks up a bit.
He's back home now, don't you know.

And though the park is fun
being back home is really good too,
especially for a poodle dog
whose nap is overdue.



20 comments:

BECKY said...

Ha! That's a good one, Daisy!! All the pictures are so pretty!

Betsy from Tennessee said...

Perfect, Daisy.... I cannot believe how talented you are. I'm so impressed... That was neat that you made the poem (story) into a walk by the poodle... That is wonderful.... Thanks so much!!!!!

Have a great weekend.
Hugs,
Betsy

Mildred said...

Very creative and a lot of fun! That had to be difficult to match the words with the pictures. That sweet Max is a cutie!

Melissa said...

I love this so much haha... you're awesome Daisy!

Daisy said...

Becky, Betsy, Mildred, and Melissa, good morning to you all. :-) Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. It was kind of fun to fit them all together.

Susie said...

I knew you could do it! Cute poem Daisy.

Happy weekend to you.

Daisy said...

Thanks, Susie! Happy weekend to you too! :D

Mrs. Mike said...

Look out, Wordsworth! There's a new poet in town~

Daisy said...

HA! Thanks, Rebecca! Enjoy your weekend! :)

Bossy Betty said...

OH! Loved the poetry and pictures mixed together!

Daisy said...

Thank you, Betty! Have a great weekend! :)

ladydi said...

I like this one the best, and I liked the others a lot. I'll be in line at your book signing when you go on tour. :>}

Daisy said...

Aw shucks, Diana. Thank you. You are very kind. :-)

Cassie said...

Awwwww. I love your little poodle. How old is Max anywho? Also, I totally forgot that hickory nuts had that thick,green covering. Is there another name for hickory nuts??

Daisy said...

Hi Cassie! Max is 10 years old, which is getting up there for a poodle. Although, he still often acts like a puppy. If there's another name for hickory nuts, I'm not aware of it, but maybe they do have another name. I hope you are having a great weekend! :)

Sandy said...

Ha cute cute...I use to have a poodle named Pepe. Love poodles and cockapoos too..

NENSA MOON said...

What a wonderful poem, Daisy!!
you really talented...
thanks so much, I've enjoyed reading the post!!

have a blessed day,
nensa

Daisy said...

Thank you, Nensa! Hugs to you. :-)

Michelle said...

clever, fun and so CUTE!

Daisy said...

Thanks, Michelle. :-)